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Orange Dreamer Minis -Trenton's Troubles- Pg 1 by Django90 Orange Dreamer Minis -Trenton's Troubles- Pg 1 by Django90
Instead of studying for finals, I decided to do something ACTUALLY WORTHWHILE! I came up with two pages of yet another side story... (which I probably will complete at a later date like all the other side stories... I'll get to 'em eventually XD)

Since Nikki is currently number one in the poll on my page and Trenton has absolutely NO votes... I decided to make it about them :3

Normally, Trenton is a very happy-go-lucky guy, but something seems to be bugging him... Aside from that obvious rain cloud constantly hovering above his head XD

This takes place in the Living Room of Stacey's 2-Story House, featuring the spiral staircase and kitchen entrance (which is where Nikki emerges from with a small beverage in hand)

The next page has some of the CUTEST storytelling I've ever drawn.... I wish I had the energy to digitally enhance it... but my HAND is SCREAMING after the first page... T_T


On a side note: I've also noticed my art style is starting to blend with a few other cartoonists', like Jollyjack :iconjollyjack: and Eric Schwartz... Maybe even a little Bill Watterson... but that's my own personal observation ^_^

Feel free to give your analyses :D

-Django90:icondjango90:

Rough pg 2:[link]
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:iconesitaro3670:
Esitaro3670 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
you look so sad, is something wrong?
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student Filmographer
Me? Not at all ^_^

But he looks a little down... I wonder how this will get resolved?
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:iconesitaro3670:
Esitaro3670 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I WANT TO KNOW
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student Filmographer
Me too :3
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:iconesitaro3670:
Esitaro3670 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
yay :3
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:iconroamingtigress:
roamingtigress Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
I love how your work is just so full of life; it really does tell a story :)
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Filmographer
Thank you very much ^_^

I hope to make lots of people smile and laugh in the future :iconnyansmileplz:
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:iconroamingtigress:
roamingtigress Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
You are so very welcome :)
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:iconzdforrest:
ZDForrest Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Writer
I like it :)
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Filmographer
Thank you :3
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:iconpaladin095:
paladin095 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
yeah am a bit like that today!
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Filmographer
I was like that for finals week... now I'm off :D
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:iconarrowfrogtmt2:
Arrowfrogtmt2 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Excellent strip, Timothy. Your characters are expertly rendered from anatomy to form-fitting clothing and accessories. Your backgrounds are detailed enough to establish depth and position while keeping the "important" details, the characters, in clear focus and the center of attention. Your shading is adequate and successfully gives the illusion of dimension. Overall, the strip is easily understood by the reader (who hasn't experienced a dark, troubled mood?) and, just like Nikki, the reader is left curious as to what is troubling Trenton, and desirous to see more.
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student Filmographer
Nice analysis...

One tiny question: how old does Nikki appear to be?
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:iconarrowfrogtmt2:
Arrowfrogtmt2 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
She does appear to be older than her earlier appearances; I would say late teens.
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student Filmographer
Damn... I messed up big...
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:iconarrowfrogtmt2:
Arrowfrogtmt2 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Just pull a StarTrek move and let it be an alternate universe or let there be a time warp or maybe it all occurs in the unconscious mind of one of the characters. Or maybe it is simply an older Nikki.
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Filmographer
No she's supposed to be 12. I'm fixing this immediately... in the next pages
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:iconarrowfrogtmt2:
Arrowfrogtmt2 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, she doesn't have much of a chest, so you got that age-appropriate at least. Actually, looking back over all your comics with Nikki (assuming I have them all) she doesn't appear 12 in any of them, more like 14. Comparing pictures I don't see many differences except that her hair used to go down on the sides of her glasses rather than bangs over the face here. She looks really good here, just not 12. Making her shorter would help, but I don't know what else you could do without significantly altering her appearance (i.e. shorter muzzle,perhaps bigger eyes).
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Filmographer
13-14 doesn't sound too bad actually... since my lil brother is actually 14... it sorta makes sense...
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:iconwlynx:
WLynx Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*Big glasses of Sabrina 8)*
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student Filmographer
Yeah, I'm not sure if it's a good or bad thing... but it's definitely a thing :3
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student Filmographer
Yeah, I'm not sure if it's a good or bad thing... but it's definitely a thing :3
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:iconiametoh:
IamETOH Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I like it quite a bit
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student Filmographer
I'll bet the second page is even more to your liking ^_^
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:iconiametoh:
IamETOH Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Really? ^^
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student Filmographer
Mmm hmm
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:iconiametoh:
IamETOH Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I'm intrigued
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:icondb1993:
db1993 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
Awesome and sort of depressing comic. Keep up the great work Django.
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student Filmographer
Thanks 8D

My work reflects my inner thoughts. Right now, I'm on the verge of finals...
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:icondb1993:
db1993 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
Cool. Good luck on the Finals
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Filmographer
Got a D+ in 3D design and an A in life drawing for animation... history is a mystery...
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:icondb1993:
db1993 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
Neat, I got a B on Choice for Life and Reading and an A on English/Writing.
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:iconmcdoop:
McDoop Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
w0w jajaja this is good!!! B-)
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student Filmographer
Thanks B^)
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:iconpointcaliber:
PointCaliber Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Third cell is my fav, the expression on her face is just so good!
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student Filmographer
Thanks ^_^ There is a tiny bit of hair that looks like a second(third?) eyebrow... I should really do something about that XD
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:iconpointcaliber:
PointCaliber Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hadn't noticed until now :o
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student Filmographer
Oops. Now I've gotta get rid of it XD
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:icontearahk:
Tearahk Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This look pretty awesome.
Wonder why he's upset.
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student Filmographer
Thanks ^_^

Even I don't know what's bugging him... or do I? XD
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:icontearahk:
Tearahk Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome :D

Maybe you do. And you're just not telling yourself XD
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student Filmographer
I suspect he's also dealing with Finals... or failure... one of these, I think. :3
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:icontearahk:
Tearahk Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that sounds about right XD
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:icongaryye:
garyye Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
wow! this came out really well! :D cant wait to see more!!
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student Filmographer
Neither can I! XD
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:iconh-perales2:
h-perales2 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
sadness.. :(
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student Filmographer
Sadness... but why? I'm not sure myself...
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:iconh-perales2:
h-perales2 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
you cloud rain on head..
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student Filmographer
Me use SAI Paint. Make pretty picture. Me Thank you from bottom heart. :3
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