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Carmena Prancing by Django90 Carmena Prancing by Django90
I tried to draw Carmena by :iconbtm05: I had trouble with the tail and bust... I'll get it next time :3
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:iconthe-b-meister:
I'm really glad that you've attempted Carmena and you did it very well :iconbowplz: I guess all that time did pay off =p Even though I see little to nothing wrong, I'll try my best to critique this babe :3 First let me point out that the anatomy is perfect in general, though specific-wise the only thing that I kinda have beef with is her Caudal fin, which could be bigger. I really love how you drew here face. You really turned her into a very beautiful and attractive shark lady :love: I like how you've interpreted her personality, she seems quite happy here ^^ I intended for her to be more serious looking but I think that's about to change after seeing this XD Like I said before a character is defined not only by their looks but also their personality.
And with that, I end this critique....if it really was one ^^; I cant really find much to pick to pieces with this elegant drawing. You've done a great job overall!! Thank you so much again!!! ^^
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:iconjb-pawstep:
JB-Pawstep Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
beautiful oAo
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student Filmographer
Thanks ^_^
The caudal fin was too small though :P 


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:iconcalicokatt:
calicokatt Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Tee hee! Looks like she's having fun :D Hopefully that top will stay on XD Everytime I wear a swimsuit (which is like never. XD) I always fear that the top is going to come flying off or something. Dunno why, just do. I'm a wierdo. XD

Great work, she's cute! :D
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Student Filmographer
Thanks, I put a lot into this work; had to do a bit of research first XD
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:iconcalicokatt:
calicokatt Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Research is great :D I do a lot of research on my stuff too :D Sometimes it's hard finding references and stuff tho ARGH!
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:iconperidive78:
peridive78 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
great
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Student Filmographer
Thanks ^_^ 
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student Filmographer
SOMEONE IS GOING TO POINT OUT THE FLAWS! HURRY UP! COME AT ME BRO!

CRITIQUE!!!
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:iconf4th0m:
F4TH0M Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You and btm are beginning to make me quite fond of shark-girls. xD Very well done! :D
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:iconthe-b-meister:
The-B-Meister Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Join the club ;)
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:iconf4th0m:
F4TH0M Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student Filmographer
Thanks and sharks were already sexy to begin with, we just made it more obvious XD
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:iconthe-b-meister:
The-B-Meister Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That brings up the question.....sharky..or foxy ladies? X3
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student Filmographer
How about Foxy shark ladies?! They got Tiger Sharks, all they need now is fox sharks!
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:iconthe-b-meister:
The-B-Meister Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:icondocbrownplz: GREAT SCOTT!! 
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student Filmographer
:iconmartymcflyplz: You said it, Doc! 
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:iconf4th0m:
F4TH0M Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Apparently so! xD
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:iconthe-b-meister:
The-B-Meister Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow :faint: She looks absolutely amazing....she's perfect! I really love it! :love: Thank you so much Django! You made my day! ^^ Sorry if she was a little trouble for the longest but in the end you prevailed. Props! :iconsaluteplz:
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student Filmographer
:iconsaluteplz: Just doing what I do best... drink coffee :3
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:iconthe-b-meister:
The-B-Meister Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really need to work on feet and hand detailing >_< They always come out terrible
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student Filmographer
Then don't zoom into my hands and feet @_@ 

You'll see how bad they REALLY are XD
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:iconthe-b-meister:
The-B-Meister Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
But.... but....they're perfect! :wow:
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student Filmographer
:iconhappyshrugplz: They look good I guess. A happy accident actually ^_^
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:iconthe-b-meister:
The-B-Meister Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Teach me your ways master :iconbowplz:
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student Filmographer
Sensai-sez: "To Master the hands, one must master the mind. When you can lift a feather with your thoughts... then you are not normal"  
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:icondb1993:
db1993 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
Wow, She look cute.
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student Filmographer
It took a while :3 

Thanks :3
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:icondb1993:
db1993 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013

You're welcome.

 

I gave you some 2 points

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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student Filmographer
:iconfluttershyyayplz::iconsaysplz:Yay!

Thanks you :3
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:icondb1993:
db1993 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
:iconfluttershyblushplz: You're welcome. You're awesome.
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student Filmographer
:iconponyswagplz: Yep, I guess I am awesome XD
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:icondb1993:
db1993 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
Heck yeah
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:iconrirosa:
riRosa Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
Nice
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student Filmographer
Thanks *Head hits desk* URBLE.... Ssss...
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:iconrirosa:
riRosa Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
she hot 
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:icondjango90:
Django90 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student Filmographer
^_^ Indeed
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